As you are aware I am still editing my first novel: An Unexpected Desire. Last evening I couldnt sleep because the beginning of a new chapter that I am inserting kept forming itself in my head. So I reached for my blackberry and I tapped away at the keypad and produced four hundred and forty four words and here is a few of them, hope you enjoy.
"Nyasha threw the sheet off of her naked body and sat up throwing her legs off of the bed. Fingers traced her spine as she closed her eyes. Warm hands slid over her shoulders and cupped her breasts; a finger teasing her nipple, getting it hard. Soft lips pressed against her neck as hot breath permeated her skin. "Come back to bed," the sultry voice whispered in her ear. She closed her eyes and allowed the hands to lower her back onto the soft ruffled sheets, as the supple lips were pressed against hers."
Well I hope you like it, there is a lot of drama following this scene and I am working on it at present, I believe I am midway of my edits and really hope to finish them at month end then I will be looking for some beta readers.
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GIRL GROWL! This looks great! Can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteVery sensual!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back, Anjie. You have a few more than 3 sentences there, you naughty girl. :) It looks like a good scene though. I hope you give us 3 more next week. I am enjoying it.
ReplyDeleteVery sexy and sensual. All about the feeling of them together. Wonderful images here. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteI like the description of the tactile sense. It's easy to feel drawn into the scene.
ReplyDeleteOh wow, thank you guys and sorry about the five sentences, didnt even notice. Yes look out next week for three more sentences from the same scene.
ReplyDeleteThere's a teasing sense of playfulness here that only intensifies the arousal factor!
ReplyDeleteSexy and sensuous. Not sure why she originally wanted to get out of bed, but I fully understood why she allowed herself to be lowered back down. Very nice, Anjie.
ReplyDeleteThanks to you all. Kathryn in the book she is trying to fight her feelings for someone else and came here for meaningless sex, but can't get the other person out of her mind.
ReplyDeletea very lovely morning tryst.
ReplyDeleteI don't care if there were five, it was a fabulous read. It was hot and the sensations were full bore, making imagery that you could see and feel in your mind. Terrific piece. Now, I want the book.
ReplyDeleteOh wow Damian thanks for your kind words, a girl needs those when editing.
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